by Andrew Morton Jul 15, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Ignorance and bliss lay hand-in hand |
Very good. I especially like the following lines: |
by Cindy
Andrew....deep thoughts are portrayed in this piece. Great job! |
by Marc Ortiz
This is my favorite out of the 3 :) Flow was smooth, Good choice of words. I like the message in this poem, well done. |
by LuvLyLynn
A very nice poem... I like the rhythm it had, how in each stanza the 1st and 4th would rhyme... It had nice balance and vocabs you used were superb... 5/5 |