A very nice poem... I like the rhythm it had, how in each stanza the 1st and 4th would rhyme... It had nice balance and vocabs you used were superb... 5/5

This is my favorite out of the 3 :) Flow was smooth, Good choice of words. I like the message in this poem, well done.

Andrew....deep thoughts are portrayed in this piece. Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Very good. I especially like the following lines:

with joy will come satisfaction
with satisfaction will come joy

It really makes you think, and you are a very talented writer! Good work on the poem... 5/5