You show plenty of passion in your writing. 5/5

Powerfull ending sorry to hear u have been through a bad breakup too :( ...nice poem keep writing :)...........no words ...........just scilence............

I LOVE THIS PEOM

This shows a lot of emotion. I love it! 5/5 And I agree with Bethany- this really hit me hard.

There was alot of passion in this nice job!

Your poem is great i can relate to it although in a girl way, well top job i loved it,
good luck

Keep up the great work. this could be a masterpeice if you work on it, a little bit.

5/5- C#@++Y

I like

I feel the pain in this poem and i love it ,it makes me think of my last relationship, its really sad emotion though, i love it.theres heart and meaning behind it.

Wow. i kno how u feel. if u evr wanna tlk to me about anything, dont hesitate. luv tha poem <3

It was a great poem, I think it flowed nicely, good job! Uhm you have some minor errors :) Just capitalize all the I's =)

Keep up the good work!

This poem reminds me of my relationship with my dad. blah. But I still like the poem. its truely amazing..like all your other ones.

True experience?? sad.. love it. <3 ill send you a friend request on myspace, im amanda. <3 later

I've been through that too and its hard bit u will get through it trust me it passes with time. great poem

So awsome i love it....= )