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by lost and incomplete   Jul 15, 2007


Im looking all around me
looking at the pain
staring right through people
seeing all their pain

im too young for this
why am i made to think
this is pushing me closer
closer to the brink

i cant stop the tears from falling
as i stare at my wall
i cant go back there
where ive never been before

no one understands
no one seems to care

who cares for the 15 yr old
sitting over there

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    =O Huni , I care for you so much I swear I would do anything just to make you smirk ^^ I loved the first stanza maybe that would be because I look at other people and in their eyes I can sense how they feel. xxx Keep the great work up and post new poems young man ^^ xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Aisha

    I luv this poem. emotion comes through relly well :]

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Awwwwwwww im sry!!! luved it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I care xxx good poem xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nina

    Brief but well put. I wish you better days