I love the ending..it's incredible to me!! :)
well the whole poem is actually really good!
i also am really glad you fixed the middle
this stanza to me is really really good:
<And after all my hero has put me through
at the end of the day
he'll be the only one
with my heart in his hands>
very deep and emotional..and so totally true.
i would, however, like this to be:
<will be the only thing capable to heal me>
more like:
<will be the only thing capable of healing me>

otherwise though the poem is so great! i absolutely LOVE it. great job =]
keep writting.
--Viola

One of the best ive saw so far

Wow
this is very good!
superman-thats a good word to desribe it!
congrats on a great poem!
please check mine out
its called
In the Blink of an Eye
thanks :)

Wow i love it....very good poem...keep up the good work...

I realllllly like this =]]]
its awesome.
i can really relate to this!
loved it!

WOOOOO

:aplose and holds up a card board sign 10/10:

Great poem ^^ I liked it allot, keep up the work ^^

This is one of my favorites that i have read so far.

an easy 5/5