Wow. excellent.....I had to stop and think about it for a while. you expressed a point I had never thought about but the feelings are so real. This poem brought tears to my eyes as well. Beautiful how thunderstorms are so unpredictable, yet you know that that split of lightning will burst into the sky, and thunder will break they silence. I could go on forever but I won't!

very good, keep it up!

swet_rebellion

Very well written Kyle. I'm impressed! You are a very good writer. I love Thunderstorms.. =] Keep it up! <3

Maybe you're right..maybe wrong? everything is controlled ..controlled by attractions....misery attracts misery...laughter attracts good humored souls.....attractions lead to connections..perhaps you connected with something there?