Wow... I loved the ending...Out of all the poems I read of yours this to me was a masterpiece...I really loved it...Again it was so mad, but I loved the emotion it had in it... Be strong though because love will find it's way to you... keep on writing 5/5...

I love the fact that you write poems that people can relate to, I feel I can't post a poem unless somebody is going to read it and think about it after. Everytime I read one of your poems it reminds me of a past experience and it's just great that you can bring your readers to so many places. I'm adding you to my favourites 5/5 Take Care GG23

It was so heartfelt, i can relate to this. the words you use are so amazing, the flow was great the structure was ok. and over all it was nicely penned, 5/5

Why..i hate that question..but its what we all live for..as soon as we think we have an answer for it, theres another question right behind it..and you captured that..great work on this, keep up the good work!

I love it.

the rhyme is good, it keeps a nice flow going and it has a easy to follow rhythm.

keep up the good work. =].

I LOVE IT GREAT EXPRESSION OF UR FEELINGS

Wow so many questions its the same with me 5/5

I really like this poem

Wow..Great poem

100% cool poem

DAMN!- This is sooo amazing this is very good great choice of words.. i really love it.

DAMN!- This is sooo amazing this is very good great choice of words.. i really love it.

Love the pome now view mine ok am tanishea

I love this poem its easy to relate to and very heartfelt check out some of mine and tell me what you think

Nice work!! it was very to the point!! i totally know what you mean!! keep up the good work!!

A very good poem
the flow was so perfect i couldnt
take my eyes off it
great job

keenan

Molly long time no talk but I am back but this poem was vey heartfelt and very good. it came right from the heart. I always enjoyed reading your poems and still do.

Another good poem by you
everything was on point....=).....5/5

Lovely poems the poem itself flows effortlessly reaaly well done its a great piece of work 5/5

Beautiful
what i liked the most was the rhythm and the way the beginning and the ending are connected:

I cry at night
you wonder why?

... and to this day,
I still wonder, why?