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Hey nice work, i like how u worte each lines and the emotions are powerful and i can say it was really sad. and how u end the poem is good it was so smooth.Keep it up!

Beautiful in that sad sorta way. The emotions where so intense, so deep, I to felt as if it where I experiencing pain.
Quite talented.
I really enjoyed your work,
Keep writting,
Elaine.

Wow! what an emotional poem, and i thought your other one was emotional.. you are an amaing writer, you really captivate the imagination of your readers. I felt almost as if i were there standing over a person killing her self to get rid of the pain! Excellent!! again..5/5
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It was so sad, i', almost crying, it had so much emotion, you can tell you wrote this straight from the heart. 5/5

To say this is the end
is the only way I know.
And as the blood soaks through the floor
I smile through the sharp pain,
because I know... YOU can never hurt me again.

my fave lines^^

It's so true that the first broken heart is by far the worst to go through and after that everything just doesn't hurt close to as much. It's a good feeling when you wake up one day and say to yourself "I don't care for him/her anymore" Excellent job 5/5 GG23