It doesn't matter... (anymore)

Wow that was great i can totally relate 5/5 once again very nice

Awww i loved this poem,.. it was so heartfelt. I could really feel all of your emotions! Life is hard, and i think that your peom helps pople to see how othrs feel as a concequent of our actions! very inspiring!!! And the ending wa incredible.. really put the rest of the poem into perspective.. all in all dff a 5/5..
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I loved this poem.
i understand this feeling so well and i've written some simliar poems.
your imagery is profound though.
i really enjoyed reading it.

"Recalling every miserable detail,
of such a miserable life."

I love how you used miserable in both stanzas there...just gives it that emphasis on the emotion you're trying to put out there..great work on this one!

"you've killed my will to live... " love the contrast in that line!

I liked it, it was good. the structure was good, the flow was good, and it was just great. 5/5

Tell me I'm worthless,
why not make me cry?

my fave lines ^^