I liked this poem, its really sad and the emotion is strong..i give 5/5

I can understand your pain and emotions in this poem, love is amazing while it lasts but nothing hurts as much as losing it. I loved the flow and the way your poem was written, the words are very powerful and heartfelt. Excellent work 5/5 GG23

I liked it, it was good. the structure was good, the flow was good, and it was just great. 5/5

Tell me I'm worthless,
why not make me cry?

my fave lines ^^

"Recalling every miserable detail,
of such a miserable life."

I love how you used miserable in both stanzas there...just gives it that emphasis on the emotion you're trying to put out there..great work on this one!

"you've killed my will to live... " love the contrast in that line!

I loved this poem.
i understand this feeling so well and i've written some simliar poems.
your imagery is profound though.
i really enjoyed reading it.

Awww i loved this poem,.. it was so heartfelt. I could really feel all of your emotions! Life is hard, and i think that your peom helps pople to see how othrs feel as a concequent of our actions! very inspiring!!! And the ending wa incredible.. really put the rest of the poem into perspective.. all in all dff a 5/5..
xXx

Wow that was great i can totally relate 5/5 once again very nice