Incomplete without you (Part III)

by Fsams   Jul 16, 2007


I love you and I can't forget you
You are my life and everything
I can never love someone else
If it is not you, it's no one else

No matter how many countless nights
I have to spend lonely without you
I will keep the promise I made
Never to leave the love I had

I wished you from the bottom of my heart
Just to be with you, never to be apart
You were the only who could ever
Fulfill my wish and keep forever

All my dreams were shattered
My heart broken in to pieces
My life will remain incomplete
Until you come back into my life

It hurts a lot to see you express
Your love to someone else
My heart is torn apart
And it's a broken heart

My love will remain intact
Just for you and in fact
I will wait for a day
You'll come, never to go away

Written by Fsams
15/07/2007
Monday 9:04

IMP: This is the final part of this poem. I wrote this piece for a college buddy. She explained me her story and I put them in poetic lines. the first person in this piece is a girl. PM me for further elucidations.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    This poem really stands out as it shows the story in a logical sequence! Loved the word choice and the overall imagery was marvellous!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent write... so emotional... it really touched my heart... i read all the parts..

    they are very well written.. the flow and rhyming is wonderful...

    "My love will remain intact
    Just for you and in fact
    I will wait for a day
    You'll come, never to go away"

    ^^ Loved the last part... I hope your friend is no longer sad...

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Very beautiful series i lved it... this is definatly going on my fav. poems list... all tree parts. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Wow. waht a wonder ful ending to an already awesome trilogy. I love it. this one is most deffinately going on my favs list.. like the second one this one fit in seamlessly.. this is an example of in my mind a perfect poem. 10/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Annissha

    5/5 omg thiz poem waz the bezt i read out of the 3 parts u wrote... i actually cried on thiz one and i loved theze 2 stanzas

    It hurts a lot to see you express
    Your love to someone else
    My heart is torn apart
    And it's a broken heart

    My love will remain intact
    Just for you and in fact
    I will wait for a day
    You'll come, never to go away

    man i can relate 2 that cuz the love of my life fell in luv wit sumone elze and i waz so torn 2 pieces...i will alwayz luv him alwayz as long az i live... i hope that gurl appreciated u writing thiz..i know i did
    once again great job

    much luv
    peachez

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