I agree a 100% with Samantha.
It's amazing how you never lost the original flow or rythmatic emotions. Everything stayed the same and came together a for a spectacular ending.
Very memorable.
Love your work.
Elaine.
5/5 there's just no way I could give you less.

There's no greater pain then being apart from the person you love so much. Great word choice and flow as always and the imagery was perfect. Excellent work 5/5 GG23

Whoah reli cool poem,three sequels were gr8,i liked sum lines in this 1 ,it was touching in sum ways..cud relate to it...awww brought tears to my eyes reli!!!!

Beautiful sad poems you penned here, flow well within beautiful expression emotions..... Love never promises instant gratification, only ultimate fulfillment. Love realizes and accepts that there will be disagreements and disturbing emotions... There may be times when miles lay between, but love is a commitment. It believes, and endures all things. have a good day, best wishes. Bert.

That was a beautifully written poem, the promises that were made in the poem, although sad and heartfelt, they were also poeticly written. I can really relate to this poem, as your friend shares my felings as i am also in the same possision! send her my love!

Truely great poem though!

kirsty xXx

This was an amazing poem. i absolutely loved it.. just in the 3rd stanza.. is that supposed to be "only one" or am i just reading it differently?
either way, it was well written, very sad, but i loved it.
and i am sorry to hear about that (im assuming this is all true) how all goes the way you wish it to be
5/5
<3 Sami

Wow...this is an amazing poem. its very emotional. i like. 5/5 :)

"It hurts a lot to see you express
Your love to someone else
My heart is torn apart
And it's a broken heart"

worst pain one can ever feel...as sad as it is to read, its an amazing poem..i love how your rhyme scheme changed up a bit in every stanza..you kept it interesting right until the last line..keep up the great work!

Line 11 : "You were the only who could ever" I think you meant --You were the only ONE who could ever--

Line 15 : "My life would remain incomplete" I think it should be "will" not "would"

the ending wasnt that good, the beggining was great, then towards the end it seemed like you forced the rhyming, again, like you did in the first. but good job! 5/5

~Kristina

Well, I do hope the young lady appreciates your writing this for her. I know I do, thanks for sharing such a loving and heartfelt story with us. You wrote it beautifully.

Nice ending. Theonly thing I'd fix is the forced rhyming, and how some parts dont rhyme. i give this one a 4, but the others received 5s.

still, i enjoyed these poems. =]

I thought the ending was good

and i agree with some of the others ahead of me ^^

that some of your rhyming seemed forced

and i hope the person you wrote this for

apreciates it because this is very good

again, 5/5

Rlly like it and the ending so very good. 5/5

Ohh!! I love it...Im lost for words. you're good at what you do, keep up the good work

Nice job but i would change the and its a broken heart to now its a broken heart that was a good trio well done the only fault was one word lol top marks!!

Wow i love how u can take a story and put it into a poem i love it

Its awesome :))))

My love will remain intact
Just for you and in fact
I will wait for a day
You'll come, never to go away

^^ I like those....Very good poem...

You expressed this is so much beauty...

5/5...

I really have enjoyed reading this poem. I have also read the other two and all three pieces were as equally as good as the other. I'm sure the person you wrote this series of poems for really appeciates them. Well done on creating another beautiful poem. ~mel

Loved it keep it up