This is a good poem i like the flow that passes through it, i understand what your trying to express something like that happened to me aswell, good job i liked it 5/5

I read the whole poem, this was a great ending. A very sad poem and quite a hopeless story, but very real.

Nicely done. Perhaps adding more coherent/vivid details will further enhance the flow? Hm.

"It hurts a lot to see you express
Your love to someone else
My heart is torn apart
And it's a broken heart"

That stanza tugged my heart completely. It made me connect to a time when I experienced an unrequited love. But, oh, well. Whatever. Though it wasn't my forte anymore, the poem was quite nice to read. Nice one.

JUST BEAUTIFUL, i really dont know what else to tell you, KEEP WRITING

Man why do I always have to be the David Hasselhoff of poetry. I'm really sorry only a three from me. 3 of the stanzas were inconsistant with rhyming. I know I use that word like a maniac but consistancy has a huge part of the quality of the poem. And You know that your rating will barely change and you'll go another point up with the next person rating you a five so you'll be fine with my 3. The other reason why it's a three I just wish it had a little more umph to it. People love poems are starting to sound very similar. I know no one's perfect and I have many poems I could point out that aren't that great of mine but I tend to keep those away from people. Something needs to be a little different.

Ok anyways i try not to get personal on ... well anything really haha but yeah haha jsut thinking about losing my gf hurts lol well another good poem 5/5

I love you and I can't forget you
You are my life and everything
I can never love someone else
If it is not you, it's no one else

very first stanza of this poem touched my heart. it realy relates to me.. i enjoyed you poem it was sad aswell specially

All my dreams were shattered
My heart broken in to pieces
My life will remain incomplete
Until you come back into my life

this stanza made me sad... full of emotions. your poem speaks alot of words

fsams i wish you good luck for the future aswell.

take care
5/5

It is a rare talent to empathize with someone’s feelings to the point of poetical capturing them yet it seems by what I read that is what you have done 5>>>

I like how you did this poem in three parts its really cool. this whole poem is so sad but sweet! all of them have had a great flow and some very nice rhymes strong emotion and good word use! 5/5

It was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a lovely poem to read like all 3 parts. . nice work 5/5

Beautiful again.
Deep and touching.
Sometimes the rhyming was a bit off, but behind that it was a beautiful piece of writing.
Loved reading it.
Take care

This is adorable. There's so much in those lines, every word like a piece of a broken heart. I love how it feels like you've taken something like a loving pain and translated into words.
Great work :)
5/5

This is the best one! It has much more depth, not that the others aren't deep, but I think you know what I'm getting at. 5/5

Wow..this is a great piece. I really like it.
The emotions speak out so loud from this
poem .I give it a 5/5!! GREAT JOB. :)

Heya
great finish
hope things worked out for your friend
really good job
tis sad what happened but
life is sad sometimes
good job once again

Keenan

Man thats deeo bro, and if its true im sorry for your lost..

Wow..0_o this was amazing.. even if there was no part 1 and 2, this would have still been amazing..0_o its amazing!^__^

but seeing as they aRe supposed to be connected..
in the first part, it was like: You told me to get away from you; For you wanted someone else to enter..
then in the second part, it was like: I kept asking you what is wrong; And every time you said "nothing"..
so was a reason really given or not? or not at first, then later on given?hehe.. I'm sorta confused, or is it really meant like that?^_^ this isn't really a big deal, but I just wanted to ask..^_^

anyway, this is still a definite 5/5..
these lines here, for me, are flawless..
I can never love someone else
If it is not you, it's no one else
love really IS stubborn, huh?=) i love it! ^_^

amazing..0_o

Aww. I love it, great ending. The only advice that i have is to make the rhyme scheme a little better. some of the words to me didnt rhyme too well. over all. great job! keep up the good work

That was really sweet of you to do that for ur friend. Tell her she can move on, it can happen. It was a really touching story. I've gone through this before and trust me, u can move on. 5/5

Very nice poem - emotions were very strong. I can feel the sadness in your words. Keep up the good work!! ~Tara