This was ok poem, it dragged a little too much for me The thought behind was heartfelt but it seemed way too long Plot121

5/5 omg thiz poem waz the bezt i read out of the 3 parts u wrote... i actually cried on thiz one and i loved theze 2 stanzas

It hurts a lot to see you express
Your love to someone else
My heart is torn apart
And it's a broken heart

My love will remain intact
Just for you and in fact
I will wait for a day
You'll come, never to go away

man i can relate 2 that cuz the love of my life fell in luv wit sumone elze and i waz so torn 2 pieces...i will alwayz luv him alwayz as long az i live... i hope that gurl appreciated u writing thiz..i know i did
once again great job

much luv
peachez

Wow. waht a wonder ful ending to an already awesome trilogy. I love it. this one is most deffinately going on my favs list.. like the second one this one fit in seamlessly.. this is an example of in my mind a perfect poem. 10/5

Very beautiful series i lved it... this is definatly going on my fav. poems list... all tree parts. 5/5

Excellent write... so emotional... it really touched my heart... i read all the parts..

they are very well written.. the flow and rhyming is wonderful...

"My love will remain intact
Just for you and in fact
I will wait for a day
You'll come, never to go away"

^^ Loved the last part... I hope your friend is no longer sad...

keep writing..

This poem really stands out as it shows the story in a logical sequence! Loved the word choice and the overall imagery was marvellous!