Morbid Melody

by GretaInsideOut   Jul 16, 2007


Shadows cast along this wall,
Forgotten moments of happy call.
In a moment I can slip away,
Without a bleeding memory to pay.

Trials of this life,
Leave me feeling empty,
Trained temptation,
Vocal translation.
Collision is all I need.

Discrimination of my words,
Will not decay your hate.
Gloomy days of endless pain,
Hated are the emotions you drain,
Mirrored: the agony you own.

Another year I'm trapped inside,
This Hell that is my own.
Boarder to boarder I will cross,
Not to find sadness loss.
Demon days, we are so young.

Turned backs on my horizon,
Mamma's gone, she won't confess,
The path you take to happiness.

Exits smile with ecstasy,
The forbidden is secured.
Cruelty calls another pace,
Knowing you can't forget this place.
Prescribe me what I need.

No fixation, miss interpretation,
Forgotten lies seep red.

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  • 17 years ago

    by tears i cry

    I ADORE THIS POEM
    it deffiantely my favourite it was sad and yet hppy i especially loved the first stanza
    Shadows cast along this wall,
    Forgotten moments of happy call.
    In a moment I can slip away,
    Without a bleeding memory to pay.
    although i think the last line should ended in
    left to pay

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another amazing poem from you... i really like it..the word usage is great and the flow is perfect..

    "Exits smile with ecstasy,
    The forbidden is secured.
    Cruelty calls another pace,
    Knowing you can't forget this place.
    Prescribe me what I need."

    ^^i absolutely love this part...its amazing..

    5/5

    you're an awesome writer...keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by STEVE

    Once again you are an awesome writer maybe I will be as good as you one day 5/5 Steve

  • 17 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    This is a very good poem... great job