I can relate to this piece.
It is so sad, emotional and greatly written.
I enjoy in your poetry very much.
You should correct copy/paste errors, the poem would be easier to read.
Keep up!
5/5

Very nice poem dear. I loved the flow and the word choice was great. The whole poem is cohesive and this adds more flavour to its content. 5/5 all the way

Fsams

Loved it
I can't relate myself, but I've felt things close to it...
like moonlight said, great word choice
can't wait to read more
tim

Wow, what a way to express such hurt and heart ache. I really enjoyed this. I read it three times.

I was kind of stuck in a somnambular haze,

I definetly took a moment a looked that word up. Half awake half dreaming. I LOVE IT.

nice one.

Ouch.
That brought back a few memories and recents ones too so it hurt.
I can totally relate
5/5

Wowww. This is so heartfelt! It's so good that you can express you're emotions like that. It's such a relatable poem and captivates the reader from line 1. I love the lines "My cheeks wet and my chest hollow. Not knowing who I am anymore." I can really relate to that. This was amazingly written. I loved reading it, well done :D 5/5 for suree :)

Very well written. The pain is so utterly evident it sucks the reader in. It flows and the structure fits the story well. I dig the use of somnambular too! Wonderfully penned!