by BleedingAngel Jul 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I am sorry Ana, for letting you down |
Good work |
Brilliant. I love the way you personify to intensify the poem, the imagery is so powerful and it flows, i love it. |
by The WriTer
Great poem, love the truth behind it. |
by Jenni Marie
This is so sad..heart breaking to read and yet so beautifully written at the same time. a powerful opening with each line just getting better..perfect ending, really hits the reader in the face it has such intensity. |
Wow, filled with such powerful emotions and it truely hit me..ive had friends whove gone through the same thing and its a very painful thing...amazing write! |