OMG Melissa!! This is heart felt through and through!! Brought tears to my eyes...
Wonderfully written!!

Wow i hardly say wow
few lines describe life.... honest offer from sweet heart.... i love it so much .. well done

A beautiful piece, subtle and succinct yet conveying all the love there can be between father and daughter, be it in the confines of a small room.

Nick

Beautifully moving write 5/5