Since You Left

by trist3sa   Jul 16, 2007


Dedicated to my x-boi...diocel...

I'm tired of missing you and drying all these tears,
Sitting in a corner, drinking all these beers.

The time is so slow, these days seem so long,
Everything I do in a way feels wrong.

They say that ill get over you, that theres plenty of fish in the sea,
But no matter how hard I look I will never find the right one for me.

Because to me every guy is the same,
Never taking me seriously, only as a game.

Love doesnt exist, its all just a lie,
I realized all that when you broke my heart and left it there to die.

But even after that, I think about you all the time,
Because it bothers me so much to know that your not mine.

But still how I wish I could hear you voice, those simple words "I Love You",
The ones that brought me rejoice

I still just cant believe that it all went by so fast,
But I have to move on and leave you in the past.

Everything is so dull, nothing is like before,
Nothing seems to make sense to me these days anymore.

The world is so quiet, to it I have become deaf,
And its all because I havent been the same ever since you left

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is how you feel and it is put into a poetic form. I can tell because we have all been there.

    But still how I wish I could hear you voice, those simple words "I Love You",
    The ones that brought me rejoice

    There are som area's that need improvement. That is one of them, you need to improve how you flow, one line is waaaaaay too big.

    Love doesnt exist, its all just a lie,
    I realized all that when you broke my heart and left it there to die.

    samething there. I know that it's hard to shorten how you feel, I'm just saying that is a place where you can imporve your poems.

    I think that this is a poem that we have all experienced. I wish there was some quick fix to get over it but there's not.

    I wish you all the best and I hope that this advice helps you in some way shape or form.

    Regards,
    Shaun

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Wow a powerful poem well done.5/5

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