by PoEtiCmYme Jul 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
His presence overwhelms my lonely shadow |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a good poem.. I wish you made it longer.. Anyway just a suggestion to improve this poem.. Try to use punctuations =) |
by aisyned
Wonderful poem Girl.I felt it.Itz hot. love it. keep writing |