I lOve this peom, it REALLY Touched me =)

This is an outstanding poem and as a senior member I will vote it into the weekly contest.

A truly beautiful write. It doesn't look like the work of someone who just started writing. Lol. Love your use of words and expressions. Never stop writing! 5/5

` Liz =]

This is a gorgeous poem. I refuse to believe that you just started writing. You have wonderful imagery and description. YOU'RE a winner. Keep it up, you're AMAZING.

Wow...that was so good.....i love it....

Congrats on the contest win....great write....well deserved win!

Absolutely magical! I loved it. Congratulations - it definitely is a masterful piece worthy of gracing the winner's top spot!

Loved the language you used and how you had to read right into the poem to get the meaning out of it. I do adore reading poems of love that goes beyond mortality.

Mo

Congratulations on the contest win, awesome penned....! you deserved it more than ever you know....Best wishes.

This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...

Congrats.....that was fast:) Great job!
Take Care Cindy

OH itS a lovelY writinG...i prefeR mucH... thankS lol.....

luzaN

Crazy words...great job

Congratulations, no doubt!

This magical read took me on
a mind expanding visual
adventure to say the least.
Excellent work my friend,
Bogie

OncE agaiN.....

Aww, that'S a sweetTpoeM! I likE iT :)

luzaN

Great poem, every stanza is amazing. This piece holds so much emotions, and it's very deep. You have excellent wording in it, and the flow is good, too. The fourth stanza is my favorite.
Well done, 5/5 from me

This is an amazing and very touching poem with an inventive use of language to build meaning. I especially like the first stanza and the ending.

Imi
xXx

Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

Hi i am maranda and i love ur poe is is so sweet hay read mine and tell me what you think well great job o the poem

Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..

Nazeer

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN