Im never gonna let you go

by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx   Jul 16, 2007


Why do you keep appearing
when my mind tells me your in the process of disappearing??
i found a new guy
but my heart just doesn't want to say goodbye
i thought i forgot about you for good
i guess my feelings were misunderstood
dreams are passing me all these thoughts
from the good ones to the ones that we fought
i want you in my life
all the way to the point to be your wife
please come back to me first
tears may burst
but i want you
and every little thing you do
lets take a walk
you said we can talk
i cant move on
cuz i really don't want you gone
i miss you more than anything
well, my feelings for you wont change nothing
but i wanted to let you know
that I'm never going to let you go

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    The endign was awesome great poem it was enjoyable to read

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awww i liked this poem, it was heartfelt and beautifully written. the ending was great, really strong, it put the whole poem in prospective!! 5/5
    xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by annette sigala

    I liked it.... keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I agree, the middle was a little weak because some of the rhyming seemed a little forced which through off the flow a little bit. But it was still a good poem all together, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This poem is really good...the middle was a little weak but you finished it off strong at the end..so overall it was a great poem.5/5.

    ~Michelle~

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