This poem is really good...the middle was a little weak but you finished it off strong at the end..so overall it was a great poem.5/5.

~Michelle~

I agree, the middle was a little weak because some of the rhyming seemed a little forced which through off the flow a little bit. But it was still a good poem all together, 5/5

I liked it.... keep up the good work

Awww i liked this poem, it was heartfelt and beautifully written. the ending was great, really strong, it put the whole poem in prospective!! 5/5
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The endign was awesome great poem it was enjoyable to read