by Michelle18 Jul 16, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
In my dreams, |
WOW, yea right now in my house i know there is a haunting presence and its ruining my life |
Aww this is a really good powm, it was just th right length for the topic, and although it was short it was still very powerful. i loved it .. great right, i feel similar about an ex.. thats why i also think its good , co i can relate to it .. kep it up .. 5/5 |
by Si sI
This is a pretty good poem with a pretty good story.. nice job and nice flow and nice rhythm!! :) |