I LOVE IT. LOVE IT.

wow. i don't even know what to say.
i like that it's short, but it really gets the point across. i think a lot of people can identify with this feeling as well.

keep it up!

I think what's best of this poem is that many (including myself) can relate to it, especially teenagers. It's so hard to fit in, and sometimes you want it so badly but you just can't, because you feel trapped, as you just said it in your poem.

I loved,how I could really understand what you were going through, and how you were feeling, I could really feel the desperation of not fitting in, and how bad you feel about yourself.

I think my favorite line would be:

"Because Im trapped inside of this unknown person,"

I can relate to it, in so many ways.

Thanks for sharing this poem, I could really feel your pain. And I'm being completely honest.

Keep writing.

Great job! 5/5

Oh, and if you ever need anyone to talk to, or whatever. I'm here. I know what it feels like, it's hell.

I love this poem

very good job.. very sad and i love sad poems... ican relate to this one to.. :)

Awww this is such a good, strong poem, you really captured me .. you upheld something that most of us at one point feel, but you wrote it beautifully and poeticaly/ i could really feel the emotion and pain in this poem. very well done!
xXx

This poem had so much emotion in it

it was great

It was short and to the point
i mean the flow was magnificent
a great read

5/5

Another good poem, i enjoyed it. beautiful write, you're very talented. your poems carry a lot of emotion and weight to them. wonderful job.

Very nice i feel that way sometimes its horrible and as someone said to me people always see the bad because they are constantly trying to find fault in others its human nature!! anyway hey you said comment one or the other so i thought id do both :)...