Ooooh! Very creeeeppppyyyy. I love how it leaves it a mystery as to what exactly you're talking about. It was exellent! I can't believe I'm the first to comment on it! :) Great job! :)
~Midnight Sun
P.S. Thanks for the comment btw! :) Always appreciated!

Great job.It's short but it definetly gets the point across.Every word I read I inched closer to my computer monitor.lol.Keep up the good writing..

Wow, this is very effective and powerful. You said so much with so little words, which is excellent. Atmosphere is great, haunting, and the whole piece is very unique.