by Hope
Great poem, the fact that it speaks about something so touchy, and we know that this can actually happen, gives it a certain fling to it. Um the tone is mature great Job |
by Riz
This is really extremely meaningful to me. It just touched my heart! I'd feel the same way! 5/5 |
A nice twist of slight irony at the end. That was pretty sad, but I think that you conveyed the story pretty nicely however. |