Comments : The boy who blocked his own shot

  • 17 years ago

    by Hope

    Great poem, the fact that it speaks about something so touchy, and we know that this can actually happen, gives it a certain fling to it. Um the tone is mature great Job

  • 17 years ago

    by Riz

    This is really extremely meaningful to me. It just touched my heart! I'd feel the same way! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    A nice twist of slight irony at the end. That was pretty sad, but I think that you conveyed the story pretty nicely however.