Jasmine,
Aww! This poem has such a sweet and sad ending! The phrase "Shall we dance again" really gave this poem life.
The flow was a little off, but that's OK ^_^
This was a pleasure to read, and I don't know what else to say other than Great job, and keep it up!

With all due respect,
Hatori
<A dream among misery>

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please RRC one of my poems? Thanks!