I called you name

by ASHLEYDANIELLE NLUV   Jul 16, 2007


I called the sun and he answered me
I called the moon and she treasured me
I called the stars and they cried for me
When I called your name only silence came back to me.

I called the earth and she befriended me
I called the sky and she watched over me.
I called the seas and they refreshed me.
When I whispered your name only silence came back to me.

I called the wind and he carried me
I called the fire and he lit for me
I called the animals and they sang for me
When I spoke your name only silence came back to me.

Ive seen you pass with my very eyes
Ive seen you smile and my heart just sighs

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  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Very good poem i really like that but i would say change the last two lines they dont seem to match but honestly that was beautiful :) i hope you and this boy if its a true story did finaly come in contact...maybe he was deaf lol :P