by Lost & Delirious Jul 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This chapter ends as you leave, |
This poem is good. It has good wording. Although, it's confusing. I think some of the words don't make much sense in the poem. It's pretty good though. |
by Blissful
Oh my I just loved this. This describes me at this very moment and your flawless use of words truly got me emotional ... very effective use of language. The flow was just perfect and I enjoyed every part of this poem. Well done *5/5* |
by Saori
Hey Gaby! |
"Wasted time left me tainted" |
Hey kiddo, u know i'm a fan of ur poems.. good luck and keep writing ur beatiful poems.. =D see ya |