My crippled heart feeling so sure,
"Will never love someone like you"
But my mind softly speaks to me:
"It was never meant to be"

for some reason i really like that part of the poem...very nice.i thought this was a very well written poem...5/5

Greatly written poem, you expressed emotions through it very well.
My favorite stanza is:
-Endless nights, breathless days
Always me, and never you.
Time flew by and now it's gone.
Wasted time left me tainted.-
I like the flow of this piece very much.
5/5 from me

Wow! amazing poem! I love this.. It seems this poem tells what I feel inside.. Oh my!!! this really caught me..

Hey kiddo, u know i'm a fan of ur poems.. good luck and keep writing ur beatiful poems.. =D see ya

YaZz

"Wasted time left me tainted"
^ amazing!!!

haha, hey Gaby. its ashes. i finally got back on the site.

Hey Gaby!
It's me... the object of your desires... jaja, ntc.
Rousio is here... I don't know why but I'm here.
Adios =)

Oh, you know I love your poems

Oh my I just loved this. This describes me at this very moment and your flawless use of words truly got me emotional ... very effective use of language. The flow was just perfect and I enjoyed every part of this poem. Well done *5/5*

This poem is good. It has good wording. Although, it's confusing. I think some of the words don't make much sense in the poem. It's pretty good though.

.:CiNdY:.