by Another Lost Hero Jul 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
This is pretty much me and my bands first song we have made together, but its not quite done. still need a (better) chorus:P |
by TyrantxTia
Wow this is realy good. and i agree with leah about the chorus. theres alo of emotion and it's realy great. |
by Leah
I think you should make the last part of the song the actual chorus..sounds much stronger, but thats my opinion..good luck finishing the song dude |