Ready to fall

by Another Lost Hero   Jul 17, 2007


This is pretty much me and my bands first song we have made together, but its not quite done. still need a (better) chorus:P

so you said to me,
dont let us ever get too far,
but how close can we be,
when everything in me is fallin apart,

ive gone too far,
ive gone too far,
im falling away from you,
ive gone too far,
ive gone to far,

so you said to me,
"if nothing is worth it, what would i be?"
now i turn to you,
i said"youre perfect cause thats what you do"
your grasping for words now,
im tryin not to crash and burn now,

ive gone too far,
ive gone too far,
im falling away from you,
ive gone too far,
ive gone to far,

so this isnt really in the song yet...kinda just a poem now:P

So close to the edge,
So much as a whisper and im in your hand,
And I know what I said,
And im not gonna give up, no not again

And im ready to fall, praying to god, to give me wings
That I may soar the open skies
In hope your realize,
Or open up you eyes to see ive given you my all
Im ready to fall

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  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Wow this is realy good. and i agree with leah about the chorus. theres alo of emotion and it's realy great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leah

    I think you should make the last part of the song the actual chorus..sounds much stronger, but thats my opinion..good luck finishing the song dude