I'm gonna make it through. [[NumberTwo]]

by Teria   Jul 17, 2007


Okay, If you read the first one you'll see two of the last stanza's say;
"I'm losing all I had,
I'm forgetting what I've got.
I'm stuck within this hole,
that's stealing a whole lot.

I'm climbing to the top,
slipping with each step.
I'm running towards my goal,
with few rest stops where I've wept."

This poem goes back to those TWO STANZAS, not the very last one [[just those]]. The next one I do will go back to the last stanza, then I shall do another one that will go back to the first, then the last again. So, There will be five parts to this once I'm done. :]

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You've stolen all I had,
taken all I bought.
you've drenched what I have,
and ripped away my thoughts.

You've poured out the rain,
from my dear God above,
you've taken away the life,
that I dearly loved.

You've punished me too hard,
you've thrown me in jail,
you've rubbed it in my face,
then put up my bail.

You've teased me with your words,
and you've played me with your mind.
you've covered all your thoughts,
and made it hard to find..

your insecurities--
just one, that's all I need,
I don't think you realize
that's how demons feed.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Last stanza is strong and full of anger and the want for revenge. However, I think the first part of this poem flowed better than this one did, except for, of course, the last stanza. Great job, regardless. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Really nice poem...i loved the rhyming sceme in it....the flow was perfect and definately wasnt forced.....and even though i didnt read the first one, this one was great...i think i might read the first one...=] good poem 5/5