I love your poem you are a talented writer so keep up the good work 5/5 Steve

Ouch...this is so sweet, it made me kinda envied him...lol...keep it up gurl and do write more ok

Hey thanks for my comments!! i really like this poem!! i can relate to it!!
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Superb Job Rachel!! I love the poem, the way in which it flows, it feels so real, I love the emotions in which you evoke in me as the reader. Perefct ryhme scheme.. This is why ur one of my favourites. 5/5

A very lovely poem. I can see the love you have in the poem. 5/5

Big Ben

Aw! this is so cute! thankss for you comment :)

Wow. You have a ton of talent! keep writing...and i'd appreciate it if you would look at my newest poem titled "Love in the World"...thank a ton!