by Linda Jul 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
"We'll be together forever." |
by Just Lucy
I didn't really catch the rythm in it, I couldn't quite feel the flow, it was a good message sent out though but yeah it needs a bit of work |
by sheila
I love it |
by Bloomed Rose
I loved it. like Haley Austin said, love the rythm. good |
Good rhyming! |
by Linda
Please comment. |