Comments : Heart broken

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Its so sad and that must be hard! good job on the poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Lil miz b1t1h

    Look you need to just wait for things to work for you and her I guess. I don't like the fact that you hurt this way over her. I am sorry that I told you my feelings.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh very well written poem..very Sad..hope u feel better sweetheart..love hurts..we all kno that..the words are so powerful..well done my dear..5/5 u deserve it!
    -sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Awesome

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem ,flowed good and wording was good, loved it, good work, your friend Tracy d.