This is a short and sweet poem. I loved the wordings. It flows well and is very well penned. 5/5 great art of work

Fsams

I do hope that this is just a poem and you don't really have the addiction. Kristen I enjoy your style of writing and as always I have to read your poems more than once. Keep on writing.. And Hey guys what? I have an addiction too but its not to the Blade it to writing

Short, but strong. I think you could change this sentence though: My blade is all I can count on. and change it into: My blade, I know I can count on you. Cause then it rhymes ^^ But either way, it's a powerfull poem! =)
5/5
xxx

When things seem to go wrong,
My blade is all I can count on...

^ I loved those line...I feel the exact same way... Anyway..Overall it was a excellent poem...Had a lot of emotion...Keep it up....<3

I loved it.It was very deep.Keep up the good work.
<3Amber

Simple and straight to the sad point :( good writing its left me thinking...5/5

Ive never heard anyone decribe a razor blade as beautiful, but i really did love the imagery, this a beautiful poem too. 5/5 xxx

Very nice. i like this one alot.. short but gets to the point. i can sence the hurt and also how u feel relived by doing this.. i rate this a 5

I thought it was pretty good
but i think cutting poems are
becoming a cliche

so i cant rate this poem

You have once agian written a amazing piece of work. You expressed yourself in such great words. The words flowed together really well. And i have once again been there and i'm still there. Great Job keep it up.

Another great poem, you truley are a great writer. love youre poems. 5/5

Another great poem, you truley are a great writer. love youre poems. 5/5

Wow, this was quite gripping. I don't usually like suicide/self mutalation poems, but this one had a happy ending. The flow was great too, by the way. 5/5

marcella

Good!

For this one, I can only see is the same topic and same words used in suicide. hmm, maybe I got enough of suicide poems so this one didn't catch mt attention. 4 for its realism thats all!

Keep it up!

Not totally sure that I know what this means, but I don't need to!

Very good job once again.
Your writing is great!
-me