All the ones you say are bad are the ones i like the best! what are you talking about?! this poem is so good. the ones that express your feelings are usually the best, honestly.

the word choice is amazing. it really shows what happens with a broken promise.

Awww i loved this poem.. its so sad ... the words you chose really suited the poems.. it was amazing.. i can relate actually in a way that you hurt someone close to you but you never intend to ! a sad , but beautifully penned poem.. 5/5
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