by sibyllene Jul 17, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The air is warm - a lover's sigh - |
by Supertramp
A lovely poem, well worded. The rhyme a little pushed at times but still a delight to read. |
by Dark Secrets
Beautiful poem... U painted a nice picture here.. I could really imagine the whole thing. |
by Carrotgirl
Not usually into nature type poems but you make it more interesting than most |
by debbylyn
Beautiful.....love the rhyme scheme and how you've captured the Shakesperian feel..... |
by Renee
The title of this poem was perfect to set the mood...I have to say at first I thought it would be some cliche' teenage romance in shakespearian tongue...but the language was crystal clear, yet romantic and classic. I love how the poem itself is original, but the title is timeless and famous. This poem lived up to it's title, and I would think that very hard to do. |