Wonderful poem. In his nocturnal walk/flight, the subject seems to me to be well attuned with the Cosmic, transcending to a higher degree with the stars in a loving, yet dreamy manner. I may had misread it, but I did enjoy the substance...Transcendental...Wonderful poem.

Oh! I get it now! If I still got the wrong idea, my mistake. Lol.

This poem seems to be talking about a subject (a mystic, rather) who seeks to communicate and commune with the gods or spiritual beings in this meditative state of mind, and having a harmonious relationship with the Universe...

Whether I misinterpreted it or not, I still enjoyed reading this piece. A pleasurable read, as always. :)

Take care,
Marian

Wow...its amazing...i dont have words... :)

WOW excellent poem , wonderfully written by a great writer , vocabulary was great and the flow was good, a pleasure to read ,as always, you did a marvelous job on this piece , keep it up your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,,5/5

The title of this poem was perfect to set the mood...I have to say at first I thought it would be some cliche' teenage romance in shakespearian tongue...but the language was crystal clear, yet romantic and classic. I love how the poem itself is original, but the title is timeless and famous. This poem lived up to it's title, and I would think that very hard to do.

Beautiful.....love the rhyme scheme and how you've captured the Shakesperian feel.....

Not usually into nature type poems but you make it more interesting than most

Beautiful poem... U painted a nice picture here.. I could really imagine the whole thing.

A lovely poem, well worded. The rhyme a little pushed at times but still a delight to read.