I really liked the message that this poem was portraying but i feel that the flow was messed up especially in the beginning of the second stanza. other than that i believe that the words rhymed well and weren't forced. the only problem i had was with the flow.

4/5

Wow. the imagery was great, the words you used created such a strong picture in my mind. 5/5

This poem would be alot better in a different form it was too short you did well but i would like to see a different version...

Well i really like this one..you used the form properly and I give props to anyone who attempts form poetry cause its not that easy..which is why i stick to free verse. The rhyme was well done and I liked how you wrote about rain, which is one of my favorite things. Good job and keep it up!

I like this... I've never really gotten into the specific styles of poetry.. but i find this interesting i'm gonna have eto try it sometime..