Rainy Day's (Acrosstic)

by Crystal Gaze   Jul 17, 2007


Remembering memories from our sisterly love
Always laughing and having fun.
In summer and winter, or sun and rain.
Not wanting to waste a single day,
You're my sister, and Friend's we will be forever.

Day in and day out
Always together, never apart.For
Year's to come and year's that went
Sisterly love will never be spent.

By: Miranda and Paula.
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Our first attempt at writing a poem together, let alone an acrostic. Miranda I think we did and awesome job for our first time! Your so talented Hun! we should do it again sometime.
I hope you enjoyed our poem as much as we enjoyed writing it.. Please vote and comment.
Thanks.
Paula

http://www.friendship-poems.com/poems.php?id=923103
^ Please vote Miranda's as well. :)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, i loved this piece. it was awesome, showed love well and a good piece
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww, Elaine! You have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this poem.. it was beautiful and it really showed your love for your best friend! In many ways, I can connect to this.. I thought about my best friend Amanda the entire time I was reading it. We've always together, always having fun, we're more than just friends.. we're sisters, practically twins or doubles actually =P

    "Remembering memories from our sisterly love
    Always laughing and having fun."

    I would have to say that is my favorite lines from this poem.. I dunno why, I just feel very connected to these two.

    Great job, Elaine!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh cute poem, simpley made me smile! :) flowed great and nice wording. The meaning was adoreable. Enjoyed reading this!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Simple and straightforward poem. "Your" should be "You're". Just a small thing. Nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    In the title you need to change "acrosstic" to acrostic. At the bottom of the piece I think you should leave the link to the other persons profile which you did this collab with so that people can also go vote and think comment on their poem aswel. I did think this piece was quite cute. Although to me it didn't have a strong flow. I loved the meaning you two portayed in this poem it was really sweet and caring. The word choice were simple yet effective and the style was a good pick. Well done none the less on creating an interesting poem. 5/5~mel

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