Love that never see

by the come back   Jul 17, 2007


I'm so happy to have you
I'm glad that you love me too
Even if your far away from me
You're the greatest thing I ever see.

Maybe its funny that I love you
Maybe other say that I'm crazy too
But that's the truth that I can't hide from you
Because I love you so much it's true.

Your so beautiful that I can't never see
Your eyes, the glimpse but it wont ever be free
Your lips says I love you but can't ever hear
In the future am so glad that you can show it to me

I love you thats the thing I promise to you
Even you cannot see, even you cannot hear
But you can feel my feelings about you
And I promise to god that our relationship would last long and come true

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was your first piece?
    You did very well if it was.
    I thought the flow was shaky at simes, and the last line threw it of as is was so much longer than the others, but apart from that I thought this was very sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved it. i loved the concept of this, the flow was great the structure was perfect and it was portrayed very beautifully. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    This is a pretty good poem.
    The feelings expressed, seem
    so purely true. Keep it up.
    Thanks for commenting my poem,
    I'll try to make my next one longer.

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Really well written no flaws
    xox

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