Random Outburst.

by Crystal Gaze   Jul 17, 2007


She stays up all night,
trying to write a memorable poem for you.
Getting frustrated at he unworthy idea's.
As none compare to you.
She loves you.
You love her.
But she can't express it with poetry.
Why?
She writes about everything.
Made up character's, and friends.
But why can't she right about you.. Her love?
The guy who holds her when tear's fall from her eyes.
The guy that laughs when she stumbles but gets jealous when other's help her.
The guy that takes away all the pain, when she is hurt.
The guy she can find relief within his loving arms.
She wants to write about you so much, but she can't.
She's stupid. And can't express her true feelings only those she makes up!.
Is that poetry?
All i want to say.
IS I love you.
But I can't write you a poem.
Cause I'm getting frustrated.
I love you though. Love you unconditionally.
So please love me back.

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K Let me explain. I was trying to write a poem for my boyfriend. And I couldn't so I was getting really frustrated. Then Without even knowing it I found my self typing this. And thought I would just share my Randomness. Enjoy:)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Yep. Randomness. LOL. Its so sweet and full of emotion from your heart. Keep writing and take care.
    I love you though. Love you unconditionally.
    So please love me back.
    Sweetness ^^
    ~ Lainey

  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    RANDOM!!! This is my favorite type of poetry, poetry written from the heart and soul. You were spilling your true inside feelings when writing this and I love it becouse you can really tell the difference from a majority of the other poetry on here! May God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Omg.. I cannot believe how wonderful and beautiful this poem was Elaine. I can connect to this poem in every single way possible, no kidding! When I was reading this.. =) I thought about one certain person the entire time. Hehe the one guy that is I love so much, to me he is like Jake to you pretty much. I try my hardest to write poems about him but what I write couldn't ever compare to him and my true feelings for him.. Awww, this one is definitely going on my favorites list Elaine!

    5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    I adore this poem. It's so sweet. Your boyfriend must be very lucky to have a girl with such an articulate tongue!!!
    I love the line:
    'The guy that laughs when she stumbles but gets jealous when other's help her.' Thats a wonderfully clever thing to say.
    Wonderful poem.
    Kat-x-

  • 17 years ago

    by Francine

    Very good, you're not stupid though. True love can never be put into words, there's just not enough words that can express how strongly one feels at times. But this poems expresses that without find ing those words :)

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