Rofl. Great times.
"she's stupid" no your not. *slaps her arm* lol it's kinda funny after all the stuff about Jake. Well pretty good for just randomness.
Keep writing real poetry though. lol.
your friend,
Miranda

Lol nice writing, even if it is random. It's a sweet poem, though, keep writing! :D

Very good, you're not stupid though. True love can never be put into words, there's just not enough words that can express how strongly one feels at times. But this poems expresses that without find ing those words :)

I adore this poem. It's so sweet. Your boyfriend must be very lucky to have a girl with such an articulate tongue!!!
I love the line:
'The guy that laughs when she stumbles but gets jealous when other's help her.' Thats a wonderfully clever thing to say.
Wonderful poem.
Kat-x-

Omg.. I cannot believe how wonderful and beautiful this poem was Elaine. I can connect to this poem in every single way possible, no kidding! When I was reading this.. =) I thought about one certain person the entire time. Hehe the one guy that is I love so much, to me he is like Jake to you pretty much. I try my hardest to write poems about him but what I write couldn't ever compare to him and my true feelings for him.. Awww, this one is definitely going on my favorites list Elaine!

5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

RANDOM!!! This is my favorite type of poetry, poetry written from the heart and soul. You were spilling your true inside feelings when writing this and I love it becouse you can really tell the difference from a majority of the other poetry on here! May God Bless!

Yep. Randomness. LOL. Its so sweet and full of emotion from your heart. Keep writing and take care.
I love you though. Love you unconditionally.
So please love me back.
Sweetness ^^
~ Lainey