Shattered lense

by Finalgravedigger   Jul 17, 2007


Shattered lense ( edited by Cursedlies)

Sometimes I look
at the pictures we took
The smile you gave the lense
I still had your hand.

Slowly the pictures turned gray
your smile became hate
your turned down my love
As if efforts weren't enough

My lense shattered
Heart cracked in half
The day you left me alone
Was the day grief overtook me

No more false pictures
no more cause
you left me a broken lense
and went on.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Eve

    Thanx 4 the comment. i really like this poem. your work is really good :)

  • 17 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    How quickly love can turn to hate , eh?
    that seems to happen alot...
    I like the conept of false pictures the most here- I see them frequently, and make them even more.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Wow, this poem was beautifuly written. Though it is sad I can't help but love the words you put into it! 5/5 Great job ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Aly

    I like how you used "lens" in this. It fit really well. I love it

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Wow i love it.U have putted all your words perfectly and really the emotions are great.And your imagination too, it was unique. Great job 5/5 keep it up

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