There is a mermaid

by Lulu goth   Jul 17, 2007


Lying in between the grand trees
Is a lake so majestic he sees
Hidden in the lake so clear
There is a mermaid free and fair

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  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Quite a short, but beautifully poignant piece 5/5 your writing is deep and powerful =)

    xD Happy Thoughts xD
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    You really should expand this poem, it sounds like a beautiful beginning and then no end :(

    I want more! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by No one

    Oooo... its all magical and mysterious!
    I want more of the mermaid! >.<
    Totherwise, me-likey =D
    xxxxxx

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