Comments : There is a mermaid

  • 17 years ago

    by No one

    Oooo... its all magical and mysterious!
    I want more of the mermaid! >.<
    Totherwise, me-likey =D
    xxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    You really should expand this poem, it sounds like a beautiful beginning and then no end :(

    I want more! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Quite a short, but beautifully poignant piece 5/5 your writing is deep and powerful =)

    xD Happy Thoughts xD
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~