Without You

by moonlil   Jul 17, 2007


My dearest angel of love
heaven must sent you from above.

The first time we met you talked about the moon
oh how should I know that you would leave me so soon.

You made me happy in every way
my love for you increased day by day.

I dreamed about you every night
I wanted to be in your arms so tight.

I never wanted to let you go
I had so much love for you to show.

You left me behind with a broken heart
destiny has torn us apart.

What am I supposed to do
now all alone without you?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Written from the heart, true feelings of hurt and disbelieve... Yes I give you 5/5!

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Moonlil
    What a beautifuly sad piece. To wish for something so much and have it taken :(

    I dreamed about you every night
    I wanted to be in your arms so tight.

    If we could only live in our dreams.
    Great piece.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    Oh how sad... didnt seem forced at all. i like it. nice flow. 5/5 <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a great work!Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxXxX 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkMurderr

    Beautiful!!

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