WOW that was truly beautiful, well written poem and wording was great so as the flow, wonderful job my friend , keep it up ,,,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Beautiful!!

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a great work!Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxXxX 5/5

Oh how sad... didnt seem forced at all. i like it. nice flow. 5/5 <3

Moonlil
What a beautifuly sad piece. To wish for something so much and have it taken :(

I dreamed about you every night
I wanted to be in your arms so tight.

If we could only live in our dreams.
Great piece.
Take Care Cindy

Written from the heart, true feelings of hurt and disbelieve... Yes I give you 5/5!

Take care,

Ingrid